my memoir to date is alright. it follows the assignment but it could use more touch ups to help the reading flow more. it could fit the grading rubric a little more in terms of being more descriptive. the introduction and the conclusion are the weakest part of the paper, the paper starts off with limited description and ends abruptly.
1. what did you think about the ending and how can I improve it?
2. did i over use adjectives in my paper?
3. in what way can i change the paper if necessary to give the paper a better flow?
4. was a concise point apparent in the paper?
5. as a reader were you drawn into the reading?
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